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Post by Shayme on Feb 16, 2019 0:09:18 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Hiding in Mist Technique Jutsu Rank: D Jutsu Element: Water Required Specialization: Ninjutsu Handseals: Ox → Snake → Ram Jutsu Power: 10 Jutsu Speed: 10 Jutsu Durability: N/A Appearance: A pearly-white colored mist with thickness that depends on how much additional chakra is added to the mist. Function: The user creates a white haze with either an existing source of water or from their mouth. The mist can travel up to 20 meters radius from the epicenter at jutsu speed, and the thickness can completely obscure the eyesight of those who are within or near the mist's eyesight. If casting from a source of water, the technique can be performed on either being in a body of water or at least be within at least 3 meters of water. Dojutsu such as the Sharigan, Byakugan, or Rinnegan are able to see through the user's mist. However, both the Sharigan and Rinnegan cannot locate where the user is exactly due to the mist being created by the user's chakra. This jutsu can be dispelled by any technique capable of applying large force to an area (I.E., sound waves, a wind technique) greater than this one in power. Once the jutsu duration is up, or the user chooses to cancel it early, the mist dissipates. Cooldown: Up to 4 posts Duration: Posts used +1 Cost to use: 3 CP (+1 CP for upkeep) Hidden: No EXP: 10 Requirements: N/A
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I actually haven't watched naruto.
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Post by Mishka on Feb 16, 2019 16:11:38 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Hiding in Mist Technique Jutsu Rank: D Jutsu Element: Water Required Specialization: Ninjutsu Handseals: Ox → Snake → Ram Jutsu Power: 10 Jutsu Speed: 10 Jutsu Durability:Appearance: A pearly-white colored mist with thickness that depends on how much additional chakra is added to the mist. Function: The user creates white haze with either an existing source of water or from their mouth. The mist can travel up to at least 35 meters (115 feet) and the thickness of it can be increased to further block those who are within or near the mist's eyesight. Cooldown: 3 Duration: 3 Cost to use: 3 CP (+1 CP for upkeep) Hidden: No EXP: 10 Requirements: N/A Alright, let's get cracking. +Cooldown and Duration are fine, but imo you can bump duration up to 4. +Remove power stat. +Does the 35 meter range measure as a diameter or radius? +For clarity's sake, mention that the jutsu completely obscures sight in function. +Can doujutsu see through the mist? +How close must the existing source of water be to the user in order to form the mist? Once these points are looked over, feel free to give me a ping.
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Post by Shayme on Feb 16, 2019 18:59:06 GMT -5
Updated!
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Post by Mishka on Feb 16, 2019 20:29:59 GMT -5
Approved~
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