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Post by arvkyu on Jun 21, 2019 16:42:06 GMT -5
Jutsu Name: Earth Shore Return Jutsu Rank: C-rank Jutsu Element: Earth Release Required Specialization: Nin(not required, however, as it’s C-rank) Handseals: None. The user slams their hands or feet, or other appendages into the ground to cause the earth to rise up with their strength Jutsu Power: 25 Jutsu Speed: 25 Jutsu Durability: 25 Appearance: "] Function: By using this technique, the user can cause up to 5 meters of Earth to burst upwards, defending them from incoming attacks, with them able to do this in up to two directions and additionally able to do it from a few centimeters to up to 3 meters away. This is effective against amaterasu due to the fact that it throws it off course by altering the terrain that some techniques travel across. Though higher level techniques may be similar, and more durable or allow things to be altered in more directions, or may be faster, Earth Shore Return is a basic technique that one can use to build upon. This cannot manipulate the Earth of Jutsu that aren’t the user’s own. Cooldown: 3 posts Duration: Instantaneous. The shield disintegrates into a fine dust after 2 posts. Cost to use: 5 (Chakra) Hidden: N/A EXP: 15 Requirements: N/A
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Post by Mishka on Jun 24, 2019 13:13:25 GMT -5
This seems more like a Nin tech than nin/tai. Let's update the spec and stats accordingly.
How high can the earth rise up under this jutsu? Can the user manipulate the earth of other earth jutsu, or just normal earth?
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Post by arvkyu on Jun 24, 2019 13:36:09 GMT -5
First one fixed.
For the second, the first sentence describes how high the earth rises up. See, first the user slams down on the Earth, and then Earth in one to two directions rises up. It doesn't manipulate the Earth through chakra. It uses pure strength, hence it being nin/tai.
Fixed the last thing. Added a sentence at the end.
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Post by Mishka on Jun 24, 2019 16:55:19 GMT -5
I assumed that the five meters was the radius in which earth could rise up. Let's clarify that.
Also, please fix the appearance- rather than linking to an image, upload it directly and give a sentence or two description.
One last thing- let's specify that the 'cost to use' is chakra. Right now, it can be vagued into anything.
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Post by arvkyu on Jun 24, 2019 17:30:12 GMT -5
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Post by Mishka on Jun 24, 2019 17:41:40 GMT -5
Approved.
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